the dash in my life

The dash between my life the most important things to me are my family and friends. My mom and dad have been the most valueable influencers for me. My mom is always there for me whenever i need her most and my dad has always been my biggest fan. Hes always pushing me to better and always believing in me to complete my goals. My friends are my biggest support group. They are always there for me no matter what threw thick and thin.

Questions on my paper

1. I think i gotl my story well, i put a lot of feeling into my paper.
2. I think i especially did well with staying on topic and not rambling.
3. Their are several things about my paper that needs improvement. such as length, grammar, punctuations, and spelling.
4. In this paper everything came from a specific part of my life so thats how i came up with my ideas.
5. I read over my paper once or twice to see if anything needs to be changed or fixed.
6.No i didn't use any photographs except for my descriptions. But if i were to have used photographs i would have inculded a picture of me in the "closet" or special room.
7. Other peoples responses influenced me to explain my story well and show more feeling in my writing.
8. Next time in my paper i would work on trying to make it longer and also to work on grammar and spelling.

My first initial reaction to reading a book about a girl who talks to the dead was, this maybe a weird. But now that we have started reading it, it isn't that bad. Its interesting how someone can have a connection to a different word after being judge her whole life. I'm interested to figure out more to the book. And i hope that she can find a peace with the real world and people around her.